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Group Task for XI MIA 4 & XI IIS 2

Please, edit  the following incorrect invitations into the correct one !
Focus on language features ( spelling,  word choice, grammar) and structure of invitation letter.
at least, you 'll fine five mistakes in this invitation letter. if you are good, you'll find more. 


incorrect invitations letter.

 
Mr. and Mrs. Roseevelt 
234 Broadway, 4th st 
Omaha, Nebraska, NB 592824 
Date: 24th august 2015 
Subject: invitation to upcoming parent teacher meeting 
Dearest Mr. and Mrs. Roseevelt 

on behalf of five stars High school, I informing you about the next parent teacher meeting that will be held in 1sts. Please consider this letter as formal invite to the parent teacher meeting. 

We very happy that your one of the parents that takes good interested in they’re child’s life and we hopes that just like before, you will also attending this meeting too because the teachers of Melanie want to discuss some things about your daughter to you. Please don’t be alarm because there is nothing to concern or worry about but it will be better if you can meet with Melanie’s teachers in person and discuss how your daughter is doing in the school and if she needs an extra push from her parents at home.  I hope we have given you enough time to organize your schedule for this meeting and we are looking forward to see you in the meeting. 

Yours sincerely 
  
Tierra Thompson 
Principal, Five Star High School 



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